here is my entry for the contest... i know i 'm not going to win ...but at lest hope i can get top cow's attention ...my goal is to get hired by the biggest comics companies in the industry ...and nothing is going to stop me ...not even losing this contest i 'l continue drawing ...i 'l continue learning ...i 'l continue sending submissions to the companies ...it's my childhood dream and my own goal now ....
thanx deviant for giving me the opportunity to learn and meet those super artists here ...thanx for allowing me to ask them easily without going to any cons ...since i 'm here in egypt and all i can do is flipping my papers and drawing....i promise i'l reach my goals and i 'l never stop cause i can't stop thanx again
I agree with all of the above, Nice work man, you obviously have a good imagination and a clear, interesting vision when it comes to composition, now you have to continue to refine and build up the skill sets necessary to bring about that vision, which takes... so much freakin time. Muscle memory always does. Keep up the good work. Much love from all of us Grinders in the states.
I agree with Zhou. Super dynamic, lots of energy. It's definitely working for you. Panel 2 is leading me off the left side of the page a little, but just be a minor adjustment I think. (more of a be careful of this in the future kind of comment)
Your anatomy needs some work, but you're well on your way. I think you could use more Life Drawing. (also I can suggest some good books if your interested.)
man...thanx indeed i have to learn tons and tons of anatomy since i suck in it...i 'l try more life problem is i can't find any models here....all i can do is rely on model photos....yes u can send me books i would be grateful...
Here's some books you could learn a lot from: Anatomy [link]
Life Drawing This book(and it's part of a series) is the closest I've seen to life drawing in a book[link] This book isn't quite as good, but they combined the photos so you can "rotate" the model with quicktime.[link]
I hope you get to make your dreams come truer
my childhood dream is exactly like yours!
Super dynamic, lots of energy. It's definitely working for you.
Panel 2 is leading me off the left side of the page a little, but just be a minor adjustment I think. (more of a be careful of this in the future kind of comment)
Your anatomy needs some work, but you're well on your way. I think you could use more Life Drawing. (also I can suggest some good books if your interested.)
Overall very solid page.
Here's some books you could learn a lot from:
Anatomy [link]
Life Drawing
This book(and it's part of a series) is the closest I've seen to life drawing in a book[link]
This book isn't quite as good, but they combined the photos so you can "rotate" the model with quicktime.[link]
Here it is: [link]